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floating somewhere in between
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Image size
1188x1023px 209.83 KB
Make
OLYMPUS OPTICAL CO.,LTD
Model
C5050Z
Shutter Speed
10/25 second
Aperture
F/1.8
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Nov 30, 1999, 12:00:00 AM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hi again! This is a lovely photo.

Composition wise, I love how the rays of light fall on the face. It creates a beautiful and interesting effect. The fact that the photo is in black and white adds a sort of surrealistic feel to the photo. I like how the photo shows only the face and neck. Although, I am not too sure about the door. It does not add anything to the photo. The left and right parts of the photo can be cropped so that the viewer is able to focus on the face more.

Technique wise, the photo could have been a lot sharper. I guess it might be due to the low light that the photo turned out this way.

Overall, good job. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>